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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 Apr 2011 at 15:00
Unfair! Nobody can beat Nokigon while Queen Susan is watching him! Embarrassed

I loved the way it connected with Aureau's story. Noki, you are a genius! 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 Apr 2011 at 14:41
= Most tank 1 armed man in all of Illyria.

Thanks mate and well written :D
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 Apr 2011 at 14:35
Nokigon flopped himself into a chair, sweat running in rivulets down his face. He had just finished a deadly bout against a mighty warrior, who went by the name Fateful_Ending. And he'd nearly created a Fateful Ending for Nokigon.
To cut a long story short, Fateful had attacked in a devastatingly powerful manor, and Nokigon had then made a foolish mistake by blocking the strike. Of course, Fateful had the advantage of momentum AND gravity, so Nokigon's sword was knocked out of his hand.
Had he been any other man, Nokigon would've been defeated there and then. But Nokigon's fighting ability in many fields saved him. Without even stopping to think, Nokigon whipped out his dagger and dived forwards, knocking Fateful off his feet. They had had a fight, but Fateful couldn't use his big broadsword there and soon Nokigon had his knife at Fateful's throat. It was still too close for comfort though, and Nokigon knew it.
The fanfare called, and Nokigon wearily went back out again. 
The herad roared: "Next up to fight is.... AUREAUS!"
Nokigon stared at him in surprise. He KNEW Aureaus. In Keppen, the man was a regional hero. But he was dead.
The man had DIED in the siege of Bladenon. The knights had hunted him down and slain him in revenge for killing Kildayus!
Although... there had been a rumour. A rumour that he'd escaped, and had spoken with the Duchy of Keppen himself. That he'd met the Chosen One.... 
And that must've brought him here. Suddenly, Nokigon noticed that Aureaus had no arm. That must've been due to a fire, or something...
"Begin!" the herald cried, and Nokigon suddenly snapped out of his trance. He dived forward and slashed his sword at Aureaus' armless side.
Aureaus did something unexpected. He leapt to the side and stabbed at Nokigon, who leaned out of the way.
The fight commenced. Nokigon's sense of chivalry forced him to drop his shield, which he did early on, and to fight with one hand on his sword.
However, this worked to Aureaus' advantage. The man was clearly used to fighting with one arm, and forced Nokigon back. 
Nokigon realised that he would have to go onto the defensive. He then started to retreat, slowly, and allowed Aureaus to wear himself out on him.
Finally, Aureaus started to tire. And the second this happened, Nokigon went onto the attack. He started a blindingly fast series of attacks. Aureaus barely managed to block them, until suddenly he pulled away, his sides heaving. Nokigon smiled coldly, and gently moved his sword towards Aureaus' neck.
Only to have Aureaus sword suddenly smash into the blade, with more force then a worn out man should have. Nokigon's blade went flying. Nokigon looked at it, and realised that Aureaus had only been pretending.
"Damn." He said, and dived for Aureaus.
The two of them wrestled for control of his sword. Nokigon knew that he could defeat the man if he used both hands. But he kept his left hand limp, and didn't use it no matter how much his senses shrieked for him to do otherwise. Finally, at last, he ripped the sword out of Aureaus' grasp and pointed it at him. 
Aureaus' shoulders sagged. "I submit." He said, in a low, annoyed voice.
The Herald called: "And that's it for today! Thanks, folks, and to all of the contestants. Especially Nokigon!"
Nokigon looked up, again trying to avoid looking at Queen Susan. King Sigurd met his eyes. His face gave away no clues.
Then, slowly, he nodded.
Nokigon, it seemed, was in.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 Apr 2011 at 14:09
Great job Nokigon!Smile
Have a nice day :)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 Apr 2011 at 12:57
I really don't think I'm as good as you all say I am..... Thanks a lot though!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 Apr 2011 at 12:54
Nokigon is the best writer I have seen in a long time, I'd like to see someone try and over come his skills but no one on this forum has of yet... Sleepy
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 Apr 2011 at 09:47
I could picture that fight scene in my head.

Excellent writing :D. 

Nokigon is a sexist :P
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 Apr 2011 at 09:44
Nokigon stared up at the crowd, in the middle of the arena. He knew this situation. He had been in it many times- at Mortifera, he was always the champion. Sometimes the fights were so easy they got a bit boring.....
Nokigon doubted that that would be the case today.
A fanfare blew, and his first contestant stepped up. He was dressed in a dark cloak, with almost all of his features obscured.
"This is Urgorr the Old." King Sigurd called. As Nokigon looked at him, he kept his eyes firmly on King Sigurd. Not on the beauty next to him.
"You have ten minutes in a round. Begin!"
Nokigon was quite surprised to hear this abrupt beginning, but his reactions were still lightning fast. He could feel something coming from Urgorr, and he moved lightning fast.
His shield blocked the two shuriken that shot through the air.
The crowd gasped, then started to cheer. But Nokigon felt pure surprise as the contestant flung of their cloak, and revealed himself.
But that was the point. Nokigon had just proved himself to be sexist. He was not a he at all.
Urgorr the old was an elven woman.
And then, Nokigon snapped out of his daze and blocked the lightning fast sword blow. He had seen her sword whip out of it's sheath; but many of the contestants hadn't. This was clearly the reason Urgorr had been chosen- she was fast, as fast as anyone Nokigon had ever faced. 
So he would just have to think strategically.
Nokigon went for a smashing strike downwards, attempting to test Urgorr's strength. It was nearly his downfall. Urgorr simply dodged the blow, and very nearly slit Nokigon's back open. But Nokigon was fast too, and he'd been trained to fight with many weapons. His favourite was his sword, but what few people knew was that he was very good with his hands and feet. He lashed out with his foot, performing Ushiro Geri . A back kick, which knocked Urgorr onto the ground.
Urgorr's sword went flying. But before she could draw her dagger, Nokigon's own sword was at her throat.
"Yield?" Nokigon asked softly. Urgorr nodded, her eyes full of surprise. He held out a hand, and Urgorr took it. He pulled her up.
The Herald blew his fanfare, signifying Nokigon's victory.
Nokigon lifted an eyebrow, and felt a lot more than a bit of pleasure. He'd just defeated one of the greatest warriors in the kingdom. But then he sobered up. She was just the first. Who would be up next?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 Apr 2011 at 01:54
Originally posted by Belthazor Belthazor wrote:

I think I know how this is going to end... Susan,Susan... Poor Susan...  Wink

Noki you playr Wink
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 Apr 2011 at 20:36
I think I know how this is going to end... Susan,Susan... Poor Susan...  Wink
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