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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 Jan 2013 at 03:15
The Goddess Kumala

A funny thing happened on the way to the war, and it happened to the Finn.

There we were...all of us waiting on pins and needles for Vel to get back from his meeting with the demigod Zolvon over the attack against us.

The atmosphere could not have been more tense and tempers were short, to say the least.

Into this tension thick enough to cut with a knife came...a smell.

An odor so foul, so wretched that it defied all logic and reason.

"Gods...what is that?"  Kleo said disdainfully as she sniffed the air warily.

The Sidhe Princess in our court actually did gag as she left the room to find fresher air.

In walked the Finn, bringing with him an even more fearsome version of the same stench, a feat I had not imagined to be even possible.

"Finn...for the love of all the gods man...what have you been doing?!"

"Sewage mains burst all over my cities....damn near all of them.  You should probably check yours too.  I have no idea what's going on, but it looks like we're going to have to do some major renovations."

And that's when it happened.

That's when the Goddess Kumala chose to reveal herself.

Preceded by the most awful stench in memory.

The two events combined to burn themselves indelibly onto my mind.

Not that I could ever forget the day I actually met a Goddess, but when combined with that stench...

I shudder at the memory even now.

In any case, the air just in front of the Finn shimmered and swam, and suddenly, she was there.

It was just like that, too.

One moment there was a faint glittering in the air, and the next...the Goddess was among us, taking up the space where the shimmering had been only half a heartbeat before.

She did not actually touch the floor, but hovered some six inches above it, and the first thing I noted about her was how striking she was.

Not beautiful in the classic sense of the word, no.

This was no fragile waif nor Courtly Lady...this was a Battle-Bred Princess if ever there was one, and her features bore traces of Elven, Human, and Orcish ancestry, mingled together in a manner not at all unpleasing to the eye.

Again, one could never call her truly beautiful, but in the same moment, your eyes were reluctant to tear themselves away from the sight of her.  Everywhere you looked, there was something new to fascinate. 

She was a wonder.

For me, it was the bluish tint to her skin, with the deep black spiral of tattoos that covered her body.

I was mesmerized, and I was not alone.

Nearly as one, we all dropped to bended knee and bowed our heads reverently.

"I am your Mother."  She told us in a voice that managed to be both fierce and kind in the same moment.

"Come Kumala."  We all whispered in unison.  It was as though she had plugged into our souls...gotten into the very marrow of our bones.

We knew who it was, just as surely as she knew we were her children.

"This one."  She pointed to the Finn.  "This one summons me forth with his...pipes?  Tunnels?"

"The...sewage mains?"  Finn asked, confused.

"As you say."  She told him.  "They are...wrong."

"Wrong?  How do you mean, M'lady?"

"They must be...moved.  Placed...differently.  As must that which sits atop them."

It took a moment for that to sink in.

Gods and Saints...she was talking about moving whole cities.

She was asking...no...the Goddess never asks, only informs...us to move whole cities.

"How many of the things-atop must be moved?"  Finn asked in a dreadful whisper, fearing the answer, but knowing we would comply, no matter what it proved to be.

"I will show you."

She did, and when she did, several things became apparent, although I lacked the language to explain it.

The Goddess blessed me with the foresight and knowledge to describe what I was seeing, and I shall duly pass it along to you.

She waved one exquisite arm and a map shimmered into existence in mid air.

A rendering of Devil's Island.

On its surface, our cities pulsed and glowed, as did the roadways that connected them.

With the twitch of a finger she caused a number of our cities to shift their positions and form a new configuration.

Synapses.

They're synapses.

Kumala has a heart...a brain...a body.

Yes.

The enormity of the discovery hit me with all the force of a hurricane.

Kumala was a Titan.

A creature so vast that she could not be understood or comprehended except as the earth itself.

Devil's Island was her...brain.  WE were her brain, or at least the synapses that fired within it.

And the heart....it wasn't corrupted at all.

WE corrupted it.

"Yes."  She said, plucking my thoughts out of my head.

"The warring in Elgea corrupts my heart...infects the body.  Periodically the Melders must...purge.  Heal me."

Of course!

"You are the Knights of Kumala.  My guardians.  The Melders know you now.  You are marked.  Serve me well and your rewards shall be endless.  Be strong in the face of this man-god.  You are under my protection, and so long as you keep Faith with me, you will not be defeated.  You are my People...my Children, and I am your Mother Goddess."

She knew we would.

She knew it before she even spoke.

As did we.

We bowed.

We wept and prayed.

And then we danced the Kumala until we were dizzy and drunk with the essence of the Goddess.

We felt her speaking in our minds as we danced, telling us that it was so hard to keep her essence contained in so small a form, and that she could not remain with us long, but that we would see her again in times of our greatest need.

She also spoke into my mind, personally, with a message meant only for me as we were dancing.

"You, Scribe, are specially marked and chosen.  You will be my Prophet.  It is why I bound you to me...to this place.  You and one other."

Another moment of revelation just then.

Stormbind.

It was the Goddess all along.

I smiled at the newfound knowledge.

At some point during our dance in celebration of Her, she departed from us, or at least her physical essence left the room we were in, but she's never gone from us...not really.

We live on the surface of her skin.

We live within her, and She in us.

I glanced around the room just then, and saw the Finn staring off into space with a look of wonderment written plainly across his features.

I knew that look, for I could feel it on my own face.

He was the other Chosen, though what his role was to be in the plans the Goddess had in store for us, I couldn't begin to guess.

Nonetheless, we recognized the look one one another's faces, and nodded to acknowledge that recognition.

Come Kumala.

Dance.


Edited by BlindScribe - 29 Jan 2013 at 12:09
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 Jan 2013 at 15:24
Awesome stories BlindScribe!  Even if they are mostly propaganda Tongue
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 Jan 2013 at 16:29
Well, without getting into a big debate over it that would detract from the story, I respectfully disagree.  For one thing, our little alliance hasn't actually "done" anything worthy of propaganda of any scale, and our tiny island home is so small that it LITERALLY cannot be seen with the naked eye on the minimap.

These are our perceptions of the events that have shaped our alliance to this point.  Are they shaded by our proximity to the events themselves?  Absolutely!  That is as true for us as it is for anyone who has ever put pen to paper (virtual or otherwise).  

Of course, mixed in with the actual alliance events are my own additions to Illy's mythology (the Kumala stuff), and I'm hoping that I'm not straying too far from what the developers had in their minds there, but mostly, I'm just trying to tell an engaging story that tracks with our alliance's history, and to that end, I'm glad you are enjoying. :)

~Scribe
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