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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Sep 2012 at 12:17
Now this is a clever, creative  and entertaining contribution to roleplay and the sandbox. Others take note.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Sep 2012 at 00:13
Of things unsaid, of things unseen...

Okay, I admit it.  I followed him.

Not two nights after I happened to run into him in the sleazy drinking establishment in Kell, I followed (stalked?) him back to Cerilon and waited for him to make another late night trip to meet with his collected ruffians.

I did not have to wait long, and this time, what I found was yet more distubring.

He met with a ship's Captain who had made the trip special from Southeron.

Of all Velociryx's cities, three are coastal, but one of these (Cloudpeak), only just.  Yes, you can see the ocean from most of the apartments in the southestern quarter of the city, but the way down is a sudden drop of nearly two thousand feet.

A port city, it is not.

Dol'Doras has a passing good port, but is poorly situated to do more than serve the southern portion of Devil's island.  One would have to sail from there, around the Horn of Ghedd, or worse, waste the better part of two weeks sailing west to round the greater bulk of Devil's Island to even begin making for the mainland, and sadly, Southeron, while being fairly ideally situated, is cursed with wickedly shallow waters and trecherous reefs, making entering the sheltered port a feat best reserved for daredevils or madmen.

That said, if Vel wants to ship something, it either arrives by Knight's Ocean Port in the north, then overland through near a thousand miles of trackless jungle, or south from Shimmering, then meandering up the Horn.

There were brief diplomatic talks with KV Kumala early on, when Velociryx was first emerging as a regional economic power, but as I understand it, those ground to a chilly halt when no agreement could be reached over some fertile farmland (-896,-636) just outside of the city of Parthaway.  That, coupled with the provacative use of a semi-permanent armed garrison on Mount Spurling (-894, -639), and the two lords have not spoken since.

All of that so you will understand something of the sort of man Velociryx was meeting with.

This blessed fool had not only sailed into the dangerous shallows of Sutheron's harbor, but done so unannounced, and in the dead of night, THEN proceeded via horse up the Devil's Road to Cerilon, all apparently in great haste and without stopping.

By the time he arrived in the SouthShanty district of Cerilon, he was a sight to behold, I can assure you, and smelled worse than even the foulest Orc I've ever run across.

Nonetheless, he seemed both agitated and animated...practically beside himself in his excitement.

"They've agreed!"  He told his Master breathlessly.  "They agreed to your price...they'll part with them!"

Velociryx's eyes lit up in much the same way I remembered them doing when he spoke so passionately about protecting the weak and helpless around the Realm, and I confess that I felt a surge of pride at what I was seeing.

Here was a man content to get in the muck and mud in order to build a better future, and a good thing too, because such men are hard to find, and...

I was on the cusp of singing his praises till I heard the next words tumble from his lips.

"Bring them up the trail (by this, I took him to mean the Devil's Road, which cut straight through the heart of the jungle), still in their chains and shackles, all the way to the gates of Cerilon.  I want the Chimera to see thim just that way."

Chains?

Shackles?

Was he buying prisoners?   Were they violent criminals?  Madmen sold as slave labor?  Or worse, captured women and children taken prisoner in one of Illyriad's numerous ongoing skirmishes?

And what was he going to do with them that he needed them in chains along the horrifying march up the length of the Devil's own road?

And what fate awaited them at the end of that march, when the Chimera laid eyes on them?

Were they to be...food?  

A sacrifice to some unholy thing Velociryx was building in his hidden jungle stronghold?

Had I been so completely wrong about the man?

I determined to find out, so I followed the Boatman when he left Cerilon, back the way he had come, down the Devil's Road to Sutheron, then back to his ship, which would undoubtedly be returning soon, and with a most unsavory cargo.

That explained his skill in navigation.  

Most Lords of the Realm took a dim view of Slavers, and wanted nothing to do with them, so they had to learn to operate on the fringes.  Had to be able to scurry in and out of the most meager of ports and harbors...places that respectable Captains would simply pass by.

Was I now seeing the man behind the mask?

Was this who Velociryx truly was?

I hoped not, and it was that hope that led me on my mission of late night thievery.

Into the camp of the wiley BoatMan, and into his vest pocket, where he had tucked the scrip given him by Velociryx.

I have reproduced it below. 

Evidence.

Proof, both of my poor judgement, and of this ruffian's misdeeds and dark dealings.

Based on what this note contains, I see little choice.  I will hide myself away until the slaves arrive at the gates of Cerilon and confront him then, in full view of them.

Someone must stand up for them, and if this supposed reformer will not, then it must be me.

It may cost me my life, but I cannot let this stand.

Elven Slaves.

Gods!

I will not.




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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Sep 2012 at 00:11
Our Story So Far...

Here's a map of the region, showing my travels to this point.

1) Not knowing how hard overland travel was, I foolishly requested to be dropped on the shores near the City of EastGate, which lies some twenty miles inland.  Worst twenty miles of my life, just to get to Vel's lands.

2) From there, it was west through the jungle to Cerilon, and it was on this leg of the journey, that I learned not to fashion hammocks out of Devil's Vine.

3) After my interview with Velociryx, he took me on a whirlwind tour of his Realm, through the city of Parthaway, then to Cloudpeak.  We didn't stay in etiher place long, so I only have the barest impressions of them, but I can say that both were busy, bustling places.

4) From Cloudpeak, we skirted the edge of Candle'Bre's (that's the name of Vel's holdings, collectively...The Duchy of Candle'Bre) border, then onto her main center of trade, Kell.  

5) After that, it was back north to Cerilon to resupply

6) then on to Dol'Doras on the coast.

7) From there, south to the city of Calimba (bright and boisterous, and filled with song)

8) before arriving at Sutheron, where I took a barge across the shallows to the Horn of Ghedd, and 

9) overland from there on the Shimmering Highway to the city bearing that same name, where I borded His Majesty's Trading Vessle, The Tiger Lilly, which ran aground where I've marked the map with an "X"

then 10) back to Kell, where I chanced to overhear Velociryx talking with Felestro Shadewalker.




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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Sep 2012 at 14:50
:)  thank ya!  Will have more once other noteworthy stuff happens, and as soon as I figure out how to "tell that" in the current context I've got going...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Sep 2012 at 14:47
Originally posted by Kilotov V2.0 Kilotov V2.0 wrote:

i figured as much. kudos for the work. it's really a fine and enjoyable read
This fellow seems familiar...and so intelligent to....must be all that mountan air ...and beer...swiss cheese....Wink
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Sep 2012 at 14:22
i figured as much. kudos for the work. it's really a fine and enjoyable read
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Sep 2012 at 14:02
Both indeed...everything IN the story (the announcement of the promotion, and the key bits being discussed or overheard) all relate to actual in-game events and initiatives (as does the negotiations with the player "K" re: a posting in the alliance (K is an actual player, and the negotiations actually occurred).
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Sep 2012 at 13:57
Kilotov - its an announcement of the co-leader of REALM, in story form.

So I would guess it is a mix of both Diplomacy and Caravansai stuff...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Sep 2012 at 13:51
hmm,
is this stuff Elgea Politics&Diplomacy related or is it a really cool outburst of your own creativity? 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Sep 2012 at 13:08
It was good writing, we enjoyed it!
You should do more - and Devs take note - this is what game lore is made of!  :D
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