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    Posted: 30 Jan 2013 at 16:29
Well, without getting into a big debate over it that would detract from the story, I respectfully disagree.  For one thing, our little alliance hasn't actually "done" anything worthy of propaganda of any scale, and our tiny island home is so small that it LITERALLY cannot be seen with the naked eye on the minimap.

These are our perceptions of the events that have shaped our alliance to this point.  Are they shaded by our proximity to the events themselves?  Absolutely!  That is as true for us as it is for anyone who has ever put pen to paper (virtual or otherwise).  

Of course, mixed in with the actual alliance events are my own additions to Illy's mythology (the Kumala stuff), and I'm hoping that I'm not straying too far from what the developers had in their minds there, but mostly, I'm just trying to tell an engaging story that tracks with our alliance's history, and to that end, I'm glad you are enjoying. :)

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 Jan 2013 at 15:24
Awesome stories BlindScribe!  Even if they are mostly propaganda Tongue
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 Jan 2013 at 03:15
The Goddess Kumala

A funny thing happened on the way to the war, and it happened to the Finn.

There we were...all of us waiting on pins and needles for Vel to get back from his meeting with the demigod Zolvon over the attack against us.

The atmosphere could not have been more tense and tempers were short, to say the least.

Into this tension thick enough to cut with a knife came...a smell.

An odor so foul, so wretched that it defied all logic and reason.

"Gods...what is that?"  Kleo said disdainfully as she sniffed the air warily.

The Sidhe Princess in our court actually did gag as she left the room to find fresher air.

In walked the Finn, bringing with him an even more fearsome version of the same stench, a feat I had not imagined to be even possible.

"Finn...for the love of all the gods man...what have you been doing?!"

"Sewage mains burst all over my cities....damn near all of them.  You should probably check yours too.  I have no idea what's going on, but it looks like we're going to have to do some major renovations."

And that's when it happened.

That's when the Goddess Kumala chose to reveal herself.

Preceded by the most awful stench in memory.

The two events combined to burn themselves indelibly onto my mind.

Not that I could ever forget the day I actually met a Goddess, but when combined with that stench...

I shudder at the memory even now.

In any case, the air just in front of the Finn shimmered and swam, and suddenly, she was there.

It was just like that, too.

One moment there was a faint glittering in the air, and the next...the Goddess was among us, taking up the space where the shimmering had been only half a heartbeat before.

She did not actually touch the floor, but hovered some six inches above it, and the first thing I noted about her was how striking she was.

Not beautiful in the classic sense of the word, no.

This was no fragile waif nor Courtly Lady...this was a Battle-Bred Princess if ever there was one, and her features bore traces of Elven, Human, and Orcish ancestry, mingled together in a manner not at all unpleasing to the eye.

Again, one could never call her truly beautiful, but in the same moment, your eyes were reluctant to tear themselves away from the sight of her.  Everywhere you looked, there was something new to fascinate. 

She was a wonder.

For me, it was the bluish tint to her skin, with the deep black spiral of tattoos that covered her body.

I was mesmerized, and I was not alone.

Nearly as one, we all dropped to bended knee and bowed our heads reverently.

"I am your Mother."  She told us in a voice that managed to be both fierce and kind in the same moment.

"Come Kumala."  We all whispered in unison.  It was as though she had plugged into our souls...gotten into the very marrow of our bones.

We knew who it was, just as surely as she knew we were her children.

"This one."  She pointed to the Finn.  "This one summons me forth with his...pipes?  Tunnels?"

"The...sewage mains?"  Finn asked, confused.

"As you say."  She told him.  "They are...wrong."

"Wrong?  How do you mean, M'lady?"

"They must be...moved.  Placed...differently.  As must that which sits atop them."

It took a moment for that to sink in.

Gods and Saints...she was talking about moving whole cities.

She was asking...no...the Goddess never asks, only informs...us to move whole cities.

"How many of the things-atop must be moved?"  Finn asked in a dreadful whisper, fearing the answer, but knowing we would comply, no matter what it proved to be.

"I will show you."

She did, and when she did, several things became apparent, although I lacked the language to explain it.

The Goddess blessed me with the foresight and knowledge to describe what I was seeing, and I shall duly pass it along to you.

She waved one exquisite arm and a map shimmered into existence in mid air.

A rendering of Devil's Island.

On its surface, our cities pulsed and glowed, as did the roadways that connected them.

With the twitch of a finger she caused a number of our cities to shift their positions and form a new configuration.

Synapses.

They're synapses.

Kumala has a heart...a brain...a body.

Yes.

The enormity of the discovery hit me with all the force of a hurricane.

Kumala was a Titan.

A creature so vast that she could not be understood or comprehended except as the earth itself.

Devil's Island was her...brain.  WE were her brain, or at least the synapses that fired within it.

And the heart....it wasn't corrupted at all.

WE corrupted it.

"Yes."  She said, plucking my thoughts out of my head.

"The warring in Elgea corrupts my heart...infects the body.  Periodically the Melders must...purge.  Heal me."

Of course!

"You are the Knights of Kumala.  My guardians.  The Melders know you now.  You are marked.  Serve me well and your rewards shall be endless.  Be strong in the face of this man-god.  You are under my protection, and so long as you keep Faith with me, you will not be defeated.  You are my People...my Children, and I am your Mother Goddess."

She knew we would.

She knew it before she even spoke.

As did we.

We bowed.

We wept and prayed.

And then we danced the Kumala until we were dizzy and drunk with the essence of the Goddess.

We felt her speaking in our minds as we danced, telling us that it was so hard to keep her essence contained in so small a form, and that she could not remain with us long, but that we would see her again in times of our greatest need.

She also spoke into my mind, personally, with a message meant only for me as we were dancing.

"You, Scribe, are specially marked and chosen.  You will be my Prophet.  It is why I bound you to me...to this place.  You and one other."

Another moment of revelation just then.

Stormbind.

It was the Goddess all along.

I smiled at the newfound knowledge.

At some point during our dance in celebration of Her, she departed from us, or at least her physical essence left the room we were in, but she's never gone from us...not really.

We live on the surface of her skin.

We live within her, and She in us.

I glanced around the room just then, and saw the Finn staring off into space with a look of wonderment written plainly across his features.

I knew that look, for I could feel it on my own face.

He was the other Chosen, though what his role was to be in the plans the Goddess had in store for us, I couldn't begin to guess.

Nonetheless, we recognized the look one one another's faces, and nodded to acknowledge that recognition.

Come Kumala.

Dance.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 Jan 2013 at 20:43

The Problem with Demigods....

So there we were at the Christmas Ball, with the cries of "Raiders!" still echoing 'round the room.

All thoughts of festivities came to an end, and all the Lords and Ladies of the REALM retired to their apartments in the Great Hall of Cerilon to await word.

Odds were that it was simple theivery, but understand...to a trade based alliance such as ours, an attack on trading resources is every bit as hurtful as an assault on the main gates.

Besides that, our Dyallom Gall patch produced more revenue in a month than many smaller alliances received in total, from all their cities combined, so this was a fairly big deal for us.

We'd never had a sovereign violation before, and we didn't quite know what to make of it, or even how to respond.

The action was unquestionably hostile, as our borders were well known and well established.

What did it mean?

The troubling thought was that it could be the opening shot in a broader invasion of the island.  Disrupt the flow of goods and money, then land the troops.

Unlikely, true, but we had to consider it.

For the moment though, all we could do was wait, and let me assure you, the wait was an agony!

At length though, word came back, and our attackers had indeed been identified.

It was none other than our sometimes contentious neighbor, the demigod Zolvon! (ooc: description taken from his profile page).

As the son of a minor love goddess, and keeper of the Sword of the Pleades, Zolvon simply did not obey or abide by the normal conventions of men.

It was even possible that he did not understand what "borders" were...at least not in the sense that we humans, elves, and orcs did.

We knew then, based on our prior history with him (the tensions over the 20-food tile near Parthaway, previously written about), that we had to act quickly and decisivly.

"Clearly, he's a menace."  Timrath said matter-of-factly.  "We can't have random demigods taipsing through our sovereign territory, especially when they or their minions tear up sites of such economic value as the one we nearly lost."

"And we may yet lose it."  Renn said darkly.  "It remains to be seen if we stopped them before irreparable harm was done...only time will bear that out."

"I observed something of note."  Juggernaught (one of our newly arrived Lords of the Realm) offered."

All eyes turned his direction.

"There was a rare herb patch on the side of the mountain he lays claim too....my scouts inform me that it's now gone."

"So...what?  You're thinking he mismanaged his and figured he'd go find one somewhere else, and never mind if it's in someone else's territory?"

Juggernaught shrugged.  "I don't pretend to know how a demigod thinks...just putting it out there."

And it was as likely a scenario as any, we supposed.

"Only one solution."  Velociryx said finally.  "All this conjecture is nice, but it doesn't actually get us anywhere."

"What's your plan?"  Bezi asked, coming in with an enormous leg of lamb, still dripping with grease.  He took a huge bite out of it and chomped merrily as he waited for an answer to his question.  "Delicious."  He said, his words barely intelligible for all the food.  "My compliments to the chef." (which came out sounding a bit like "my comumphs a chuf" or something close-ish to that)

Velociryx shook his head.  "I'll leave at first light tomorrow.  Ride down to KV and see if I can convince him to stay the hell off our land."

"This isn't the first run in we've had with him."  Machete said darkly.  "How many second chances are we going to give this character?  There's the matter of the grain fields practically on top of Parthaway that he holds sway over...the fact that he turned hostile during trade negotiations, and now this.  Can we afford such an obviously hostile neighbor?  Can we risk it?"

That raised a number of eyebrows and the debate raged through most of the evening.

***

At the end, it was decided (with a fair amount of trepidation) that no...we couldn't risk it.

Zolvon had a track record with us.  One of hostility and suspicion and now, it seemed to have escalated for reasons not known (and perhaps not even knowable) to us.

One of us had to go.  We had dozens of cities on the island, and he had one.

That made the calculus pretty simple in our minds.

"Very well."  Velociryx told the assembled Lords.  "A slight change in plans...rather than riding to see if he even understands why we're upset, I ride now to deliver an ultimatum.  We will tolerate no further incursions.  We offer to buy the city from beneath his feet and build him a new one somewhere else, or...we take it from him.  One way or the other though...it's now clear that we cannot remain neighbors."

Velociryx rode.

This was a first for us.

War?

Would it really come to war?

Gods and Saints.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 Jan 2013 at 19:05
Another story segment will be coming soon...for the moment, I have added back a "deleted scene" from the chapter "Big Trouble on Imp Island" to more accurately reflect the diplomatic climate during that incident.  Apologies that we could not reveal it sooner, but events with STEEL were still unfolding and it would not have been appropriate to reveal it at that time.

Now, however, is the proper time, so the scene was duly put back.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 Jan 2013 at 18:01
The Covenant is Broken

I have never seen a more fearsome look in our Highlord's eyes, and he was not alone.

Every lord from every Noble House in our alliance was behind him, all with steely gazes and looks of disgust on their faces.

The emissary from STEEL pressed on, undaunted, apparently not realizing how close he was to death.

"...my Master bids that you begin these war preparations at once."

"But your Master refuses to even tell us who we'll be fighting, where, on what terrain, or even why?"

The weasel-faced Diplomat sneered.  "That's on a need to know basis, I'm afraid, and you don't need to know.  All you need to do is what you're told.  Begin preparations at once!"

"We will do no such thing."  Velociryx told him flatly.  "First, if it's our men to bleed and die on some field of battle far from home, yes we damned well do need to know the reasons why.  Second, it wasn't very long ago that right here on these shores we faced almost certain extinction, and do you know what happened?"

The diplomat looked suddenly uncomfortable.

"Damn your hide, you will answer when spoken to!  Do you know what happened when we faced the full fury of a demigod right here on these shores?"

"I....well, there were extenuating..."

"Don't."  Velociryx told him with venom in his voice.  "Don't even say it.  What happened was...members of our own confederation SIDED WITH OUR ENEMIES!  They refused...flatly refused to stand with us, and now...oh now when our men and materials are needed, now we're expected to jump to without so much as a question or a raised eyebrow.  Where were you when we needed your help?  Where were you then?"

"I...well...that is we..."

"Exactly."  Machete rumbled as he cracked his kunckles.

"I think you have your answer."  Timrath said from over Machete's head.  "And I don't think you'll be getting your army from here.  Well....you may be getting the business end if you're not careful, but I don't think that's quite what you had in mind."

Vel looked over at Renn.  "Are the Jaguars ready to march?"

"At a moment's notice!"  He said proudly.

"And our corps of Assassins and other assorted Ruffians?"

There were other nods from the assembled Lords.

"Kleo...does this man before you look like a demigod?"

She tried valiantly, but ultimately failed to hide her smirk.  "He does not, My Lord."

"No...he most certainly does not.  And given that we stood completely alone facing the full fury of a demigod's wrath this past Christmas and managed to come through that unscathed, I think we'll be fine against the likes of this one here."

"Watch yourself, Highlord!  My Master wields the ancient Axe of the Dwarven Kings, and will not...."

Our Highlord silenced the man with a sharp gesture of one hand and his lips flatted to a harsh, thin line slashed across his face.

When he spoke, his voice was barely above a whisper, and I've never heard anything more deadly in all my years in Elgea.

"Now you listen to me, cur, and you listen well.  Over the last two months, my People and I have discovered a new, living Goddess in Illyriad....we have personally met and spoken with the Goddess Kumala.  We have stared down the fury of a demigod and faced almost certain destruction at his hands, and we did so with our so-called 'allies' lining up against us.  Frankly, I don't give a rat's arse if your Master wields his blessed mother's brassier as a sling, the fact is, you'll be getting no forces from us to persue a war you plan to leave us in the dark about till the last possible moment, and because you saw fit to leave us in the wind and facing certain destruction, you have broken the covenant with us.  You sir...not us.  And now that is is broken, there's no un-breaking it, do you understand that?

We are done with you."

The man stood there for a long moment, looking mightily distressed and not knowing what to do...how to proceed.  A part of me felt for him.

"Bezi."

"Yes, My Lord?"

"If this man does not take his leave of us in the next span of heartbeats, I want you to behead him and send his head back to his 'Master' in a rosewood box."

"With pleasure, My Lord."  He cracked his knuckles in a fashion not unlike Machete, and took a menacing step forward.

The diplomat let out a thin, girlish wail and bolted for the nearest exit, leaving a collection of grim faced Lords of the REALM staring after him.

In a moment, they all let out a collective sigh.

"Well...we've really gone and done it now, haven't we?"

"Aye...that we have."

What a strange couple of months it had been.

It will be my honor, duty, and pleasure to fill in the gaps between the Christmas Ball and the item above, but for now, the duties of my Station call.

I'll write more if we survive the night.

~Your Humble Scribe



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Dec 2012 at 12:09
Raiders!

The music died as a breathless messenger burst in on the festivities.

"It's Cloudpeak, sir!"  He said with a trembling voice.  "They spotted some raiders in the Dyallom Gall patch...scouts are riding ahead of a squad sent out by the First Expeditionary to see if we can learn the identity of the raiders before blood is spilled."

Murmurs went up all around the chamber.

The Dyallom patch was sovereign territory.

We claimed that land.

We owned that land, and everyone in the area knew it full well.

"So this is deliberate then."  Machete said, cracking his knuckles.  "Very well."

Kleodora put a staying hand on the Dwarf's shoulder.  "Let us not be too hasty...we do not yet know where they came from."

And that was true enough for the moment.

But we would know, and when we did...

When we did, it would change a great many things...

A second gauntlet had been formally thrown down.



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Velo,
Your story writing is fantastic.
More important, you are the best alliance leader I have had the honor of serving with.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Dec 2012 at 18:24
This will, in all probability, be my last addition to this story in 2012.  

With Christmas fast approaching, I wanted to spend a good, solid day to get the story where I wanted it...wrap up a few loose ends, and start gearing up for the next "phase" of the tale.

So far, if you've been journeying with me from the start, we've covered some 23k words together (for the purposes of comparison, your average novel has ~100k words in it, so we're about a quarter of that), and have seen the alliance grow from a sleepy little backwater to...well, perhaps not a powerful group, precisely, but getting there.

Getting there right quickly, I'd say.

In any case, there are a number of interesting possibilities as we move into the new year, and I don't have any more idea what will happen than you (though I've likely got at least a few more insights...or at least, I'd better! ;) ), but...whatever happens, we'll go there together!

Thank you for traveling with me this far, Merry Christmas, and here's hoping I see you at back here at the start of the new year!

As a Christmas Present, I've brought the blog fully up to date, and have included about a dozen different songs so you've got a "soundtrack" to enjoy while you're reading.

The music files are high compression ogg files, so if you don't see the media player, try switching to the Chrome browser (the page has been optimized for Chrome).

Music is very much a part of my creative process, and I thought it'd be interesting to treat you to the songs running thru my head as I wrote various bits (mostly, relevant to the story, too!).

So...I get to combine good rock and roll with fantasy, and what's not to like about that!

(track list to date is below the graphic) - Enjoy!


~Scribe





Track List So Far:
Track 1, Bad Company (Bad Company)
Track 2, Fortunate Son (CCR)
Track 3, Superstition (the version by Beck, Bogart & Appice) (Scribe's suspicions of Vel, Chimera, etc)
Track 4, Sympathy for the Devil (Stones)
Track 5, Highway to Hell (AC/DC) (Devil's Road!)
Track 6, Good Intentions (Toad The Wet Sprocket)
Track 7, Your Disease (Saliva) (Melder's stuff)
Track 8, Abracadabra (Steve Miller) (thought this was fitting re: the misfired spell & Hargreves :) )
Track 9, Thunderstruck (AC/DC)
Track 10, Carry On, Wayward Son (Kansas)
Track 11, Red Neck Yacht Club (Craig Morgan) (our "Swampers"!)
Track 12, Honest Mistake (The Bravery) - Our diplo "incident"
Track 13, Don't Fear the Reaper (Blue Oyster Cult) - escape attempt 2.0
Track 14, Come and Get Your Love (Redbone) - Come Kumala!

Merry Christmas!!





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