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Attila the Hun 
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 Topic: Sagas/haikus/poems
Posted: 27 Feb 2011 at 03:23 |
Haiku-
He kill many people
He fought for his war god well
he g0dsdestroyer
P>S"dont hate"
Edited by Attila the Hun - 27 Feb 2011 at 03:41
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It's just a game. :)
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Lord Jon Flamont
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Posted: 27 Feb 2011 at 03:25 |
The lotus blossom alights on cool, still waters. I detest haikus.
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Brids17
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Posted: 27 Feb 2011 at 03:33 |
 Attila the Hun wrote:
He killed many peoples |
That's six syllables.
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Attila the Hun
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Posted: 27 Feb 2011 at 03:40 |
Kumo is fine guy
me him patched thngs up now
we game together
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It's just a game. :)
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Mr. Ubiquitous Feral
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Posted: 27 Feb 2011 at 03:40 |
c jon run
c jon bite dog
c jon get shots
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I am a Machine.
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Lord Jon Flamont
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Posted: 27 Feb 2011 at 03:46 |
There is this guy called Mr. Ubiquitous feral. He gets on my nerves.
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Attila the Hun
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Posted: 27 Feb 2011 at 03:49 |
1st line 6
3rd 6.
But You're getting there
The dude save the day
Rescues damsels every day
He is my favorite
Edited by Attila the Hun - 27 Feb 2011 at 04:00
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It's just a game. :)
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Lord Jon Flamont
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Posted: 27 Feb 2011 at 03:57 |
Attila the Hun wrote:
1st line 6
3rd 6.
But You're getting there
The dude save the day
Rescues damsels every day ya
He is my favorite |
My lines are perfect. Yours, on the other hand, are needing correction.
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Attila the Hun
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Posted: 27 Feb 2011 at 03:59 |
Caught the 2nd sentence, thanks.
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It's just a game. :)
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Attila the Hun
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Posted: 27 Feb 2011 at 04:03 |
Game Moderator Haiku
Watching our every move
Made a great game, autograph?
Thank you, have cookie.
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It's just a game. :)
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