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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Dec 2011 at 19:55
Hi Luna:

The 'edit' function seems locked. I'm not looking to change my post, only increase the font size to make it easier on the eyes. (my fault, I know, but in my defense it looked ok when I cut and pasted) 

Is there a way to do that?

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Dec 2011 at 19:49
If you want to go back and edit your story that is ok. Please try not to go too much over the word limit though. 50 words over or so is understandable but not too much more than that. I want to keep them at a manageable length since we'll have lots of reading to do. :)

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Dec 2011 at 19:34
not sure you can Ratatat... I pared mine down to the max limit too ... Confused
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Dec 2011 at 18:59
Sorry if this is a noob question, but: I would like to be able to edit my entry (particularly now that I know that the 400 word limit is not super strict; I can end my story at a better place). Is that not possible?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Dec 2011 at 17:31

Ryelle frowned as she scoured the report on her live oak desk. What a day! First, the news about the 'prancer's foot' outbreak. That would certainly put a damper on revelries at Winter Solstice. And now this graver problem--angry accusations that elves were plotting to harm human, orkan and dwarven populations. False accusations, of course, but ones that must be nipped in the bud.

Ryelle halloed down the vale for Rifiella and Chaleid who quickly skipped along to her office beneath the Spreading Wisdom Oak

"Greetings Ryelle", they chimed in perfect elven harmony. Brow furrowed, Ryelle explained: "We have a serious problem and I think it's coming out of Keppen. If my suspicions are correct, something is amok at the Steamtastic Brewery. You know how elves despise the insipid lager produced by the penny-pinching gnome brewmeisters there. My hunch is that the beer is being either accidentally contaminated or purposefully poisoned. Because we don't drink it, we aren't getting sick. Because we aren't getting sick, they are blaming us. To avert kingdom-wide warfare, we must move quickly to solve this mystery and vindicate elvenkind."

Preparations began apace. Ryelle formulated her famous Teleportation Spell. Chaleid gathered provisions while Rifiella packed the spellbooks. After a gulped stirrup cup of mead, the three elves were primed and ready. Poof! Ryelle teleported them to the brewery.

Arriving arms and legs akimbo, the elves quickly straightened themselves, huggled and began nimbly scouting the area. Senses keenly focussed, the elves soon picked up the scent of something wrong. It was at the water spigot supplying the brewing vats. While the water gushing from the spigot looked pristine, it was in fact contaminated with Pulchritudinus malevolencii, one of the wickedest toxins known in the Kingdom.

Ignoring standard diplomatic procedure, the three companions burst into the Head Brewmeister's office to report their findings. While the aghast gnome called in his assistants and halted production, Ryelle completed the Blessed Spell of Cleansing and cast it upon nearby Lake Sippensit and all of the brewery infrastructure.

Tired but satisfied, having been soundly thanked and meagrely rewarded by the gnomes, Ryelle, Chaleid and Rifiella teleported home. In the Vale, they were greeted with music, mead, revelry and best of all--one of Emily Jades famous cheesecakes.

One problem was solved, but another remained. Where had the PM toxin originated? Natural forces or nefarious spells?

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The Fool’s Day

The architect watched the sun dive slowly behind the mountains, painting the sky a brilliant gold and scarlet. He saw the suns mischievous smile, but it was too late to aks what it was about; the moon was already rising, slowly and steadily, taking her rightful place as the town’s night-watcher.

The night in Milaro was always peaceful, quiet. Only elves, gathered around a fire and praising their lady moon with songs, broke the silence. The architect decided to think the sun the next day and went to sleep, with the sound of music caressing his ears.

Only the moon saw the mysterious figure appearing suddenly in the town square, carrying a large sack on his shoulders.

Early next morning, the citizens discovered in surprise a small fair, with colorful tents and carts full of marvelous sweets. A very tall man was inviting every one of them to step into the tents to try some for free. Of course, no one would turn down such an offer. An no one noticed that nobody ever came out.

The man was Pelagro, a wizard who used cheap tricks to steal mans knowledge and then turn them into gems, which he sold in the next town he visited. Very soon, half the inhabitants where in wooden cases and Pelagro was about to leave, when Tarryg walked in the tent.

‘I’m sorry, are there any sweets left?’ he inquired.

The wizard was startled. He was too occupied with preparing to leave. ‘Yes there are!\ he said smiling. ‘Here, have one!’

Tarryg ate it, but nothing happened. The wizard was worried. What was wrong?

‘Where is everyone else?’ asked the elf after eating a second cake.

‘Was there anyone else?’ Pelagro asked trying to cloak his fright.

Tarryg nodded. ‘Yes, you’re right, sorry’ he said. ‘Bye!’

The wizard finally understood: the elf was too stupid for his cakes to have effect on him. Relieved, he returned to his preparations. But the elf was too curious about his crystal ball and picked it up! ‘Oh! Nice!’ he said.

Pelagro ran to him panicking. ‘NOOO!’ he yelled, but it was late. Tarryg dropped the ball and it got shattered on the floor. All the elves where released and the wizard evaporated.

The town of Milaro declared Tarryg a hero. They erected a statue in his honor and they created an annual celebration, called “the Fool’s Day”. The architect smiled, solving the sun’s riddle.

A few days later

Tarryg stood in front of the statue troubled. One of the sculptors approached him.

‘Did we get the nose wrong?’ he asked worried.

Tarryg shook his head. ‘No, the nose seems perfectly fine to me. I was just wondering who that was’

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Originally posted by Sonnura Sonnura wrote:

Dear GM Luna, I would like to ask something please. My story turned out a little longer than 400 words (actually 458). Is it still ok to post it or should I find a way to shorten it a little?

Thank you in advance!


That's ok. Post away.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Dec 2011 at 12:54
Dear GM Luna, I would like to ask something please. My story turned out a little longer than 400 words (actually 458). Is it still ok to post it or should I find a way to shorten it a little?

Thank you in advance!
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New here but can't stand putting off a good writing contest:
The Unworthy Queen  as told in our storybooks


Clarence Faron was a picky one, so picky, in fact, that she could have been called unpleasable. She threw away everything: books, wines, servants, floorboards. To make it worse, Ms. Faron could never use proper etiquette in public and looked as bland as a carrot. But she was forgiven again and again because, after all, she was queen. Yes, a queen by blood and not by talent. Her royal parents could never raise her with her endless stumbling and growing incompetence so they died of broken hearts and poisoned stomachs. Ms. Faron just shrugged and continued on her own but from then on carried a more sullen tone.


She was unpopular with the villagers but had requests for marriage all the time. Of course, she thought to herself, all of them are swindlers who only want to be rich. So she kept to herself as the reigning monarch who's only restraint was the royal cabinet. Villagers called her The Widowed Queen, the cabinet called her The Unsatisfied Queen, and neighboring nobles and kings called her The Unworthy Queen. The latter title hurt the most, making her sulk in the corner for hours until someone wondered where she went. Days were spent reading letters and reports, anything to get away from the cruel remarks.


She was happy at only one time of the day. At night, after the servants have settled and the cows have grazed, the mine-diggers get out of work and have a drink. Russy Stein, though, did not join them, instead he walked to the slums of town, back home. Stein was an outcast, mostly because he was a dwarf in the midst of humans. Many called him dirty and short like “the rest of them”. But he was content just going home at night. Everyday he passed Ms. Faron, in the window, watching him. Their eyes caught for just a moment but both knew.


After a year, they left. The castle quiet and the mine downgraded, a cache of gold was gone and several chain-mail were stolen. No note, letter, or sign. The villagers knew the two left together, and good riddance, but one thing was unknown. At a neighboring town, a baby was left at the castle steps. Half dwarf and half human, he was left peacefully sleeping. That was the last thing heard before news was sent that the baby was kicked out.

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“Stone. It was not food, nor fertile land that our High Lord seeked when he moved. It was not friends nor enemies that led him away from the Dwarven Lords. Like the noble Kings scarcely remembered, he sought stone to fill his future,” lectured Fandral. His audience was wide awake. They had gotten use to his pre-dawn sermon in the Stinking Rose tavern.

It had been moons since the band of Dwarvish folk set to work under the watchful eye of Fandral. Fandral the Fluffy they called him, but there was nothing fluffy save his beard.

The first few speeches had worked as desired, empowering the craftsmen for the long day of work in front of them. Scores of speeches had been heard since, and by now it was just a part of the routine. A routine they knew almost as well as they knew the mountain the worked with.  

Fandral finished off his morning mead, belched eggs and sausage, and continued exclaiming to the hall of Dwarves “It is stone that we Dwarves thrive in. When first Geofrey arrived on the very ground this tavern was build, this was but a mountain side surrounded by fields. He brought with him 11 companions, me among them. His warhammer in hand, Geofrey struck the ground with such thunder that birds are still afraid to touch the ground for fear of it happening again. But the ground went undamaged, and the High Lord looked at me and said “Here.”

“Two weeks after settlers arrived our Lord told me “Greymalkin is only as strong as it’s border, and it’s border is only as strong as it can be defended. Build a wall.”

“And so you stone mason’s were brought from all of Keshalia, united with one goal, “build a wall.” A month after building we had a towering wall fit for any palace, built of the strongest stone from the strongest mountain. Lord Geofrey came to inspect the great wall of Greymalkin, only to shout out “It’s not Dwarves we aim to keep out. Build it higher.” We must spend every moment of light building the wall wider and stronger to keep the unknown enemy at bay. The wall’s of Greymalkin will never fail, so long as we stone mason’s build no weakness into it. Breakfast is over, there is work to be done”
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