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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Dec 2011 at 02:11

To the trolls

Erminor looked back at the cart with dismay as it creaked again. It was a brand new cart, especially made for tonight. It wasn't supposed to creak. But then again, it was loaded to the max of its capacity. Yet everything on it was needed this evening.

It had been a nerve-wrecking trip so far, up to the fort of Olog Rraus. Everywhere along the way they had seen signs of past encounters with the trolls. Burned husks of barricades here, some broken arrow-shafts there. They had started the trip early to hold small remembrances at each spot where an elf had died, honouring him or her.

Erminor had been leading magistrate for the outpost of Salty Breeze right from it's birth, and it had been a tough job. He had even doubted great magistrate Piarou's decision of settling here numerous times. But the settlement grew, and many elven warriors wanted to prove their mettle in this most dangerous town of all. Which they did. And this was with the trolls being quite passive as well.

But then came this weird message. It entailed a great opportunity, albeit dangerous. But to be able to see the layout of the troll-fort was too good to be ignored. So they had loaded up the new cart and left, him and 25 of his best and greatest heroes.

They had reached the outskirts of the town around the troll-fort, and it loomed up before them. It was brightly lit from the inside by fires. The cart still squeaked every now and then, but the roads were more even here. The houses around them were dark and closed off for the night.

As soon as they neared the fort itself, they could clearly hear crude but obviously festive music and singing from within its halls. When they entered the light falling from the windows they were spotted by a disgruntled looking guard. “Hmmpf” it said, “me was told yous would come. Wason the cart?” “We have brought elven wine and strong cheese for the Christmas party.” Erminor replied. “I'ss call bossman.” the guard said, pulling on a cord that set of a loud gong inside the hall.

After several minutes the door creaked open and a huge troll stepped outside. Grey hairs sprouted from his numerous warts. “Ahh, you have come. I am happy. And with goodies. Nice.” “I was surprised by your invitation” Erminor said. “Hey, it's Christmas. Even your enemies should be your brothers these days. Come on in.” The elves partied with the trolls all night long, and realized they were, besides the lack of true sophistication, not so different after all. 'Oh, how I wish it was Christmas every day.' Erminor thought as he left the hall, early in the morning.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Dec 2011 at 23:25
The Avenging Spear
King Sigurd had appointed his Commander Thomas Lannigold   to attack the formidable Crimson Dawn mercenaries as part of the war strategy against the barbarians of the north west. the Commander took his orders and engaged the enemy but was captured in the ensuing raids. When King Sigurd came to pursue the mercenary army he noticed a lone warrior attacking and killing many of the enemy soldiers and withdrawing. Attacking, killing and withdrawing again. Sigurd demanded that the lone warrior make himself known. The warrior obliged and came before the King removing the his Corinthian Helm and stated clearly. I am Prometheus

He continued by telling the King that Honehn of the Crimson Dawn and burned his village when he was a small boy, killing all his family and that he was of a mind to attack the Crimson Dawn for vengeance of the slaughter that they had visited upon his family. Sigurd was very impressed by this display of courage and his skill with the spear so he asked him to join the war against the mercenaries of The Wastes to free Thomas Lannigold, and he accepted.

They ambushed the Crimson Dawn contingent which guarded Thomas and Prometheus fought visciously  killing many men ending the battle with a decisive victory for the Kings Army and the freedom of Thomas Lannigold, This exploit made Prometheus one of the most famous warriors of  the King's Praetorian Guard and was named the Avenging Spear ! He was given this  nickname because he would throw off his armour and shirt when combating the Crimson Dawn as a sign of wishing martyrdom in dedication to of the loss of his beloved family. 

After his great victory King Sigurd made ready to return his praetorian guard to Centrum in triumph but when they readied to march prometheus was no longer with them. He had slipped away during the night and vanished into the  land of The Wastes...



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Dec 2011 at 23:02
It just was the right weather to go fishing again. The sky was the right kind of blue and there were no storm predicted for several days. The tropical daily rain would not occur that soon and definately no sooner than the sun would reach its heighest point. The sea was calm. It called out to the southern dwarves who well unlike their northern cousins were fond of the sun and prefered much stronger beverage made from tropical fruits. The dwarves raised their sunburnt faces and smiled at each other. It was another beautiful day in the Kingdom of Larn where not war ever occured.

So the peaceful fisherdwarves rowed their boats into deeper water to catch fresh fish for the next of their many feasts. The sea was calm but unnaturally silent. There was no fish in sight although you might have seen even the smallest one in those crystalclear waters. And following those silence the southern dwarves grew disturbed. The smallest ones - not yet hardened by fight with big snakes and jaguars - got even fearful of that silence. Terror filled them when they heart the deep sound and many of them pulled the oars desperately for the shore when the big shadow disappered in the water beyond.

But the braver one watched with caution and battle awareness as the giant shape shoved through the water below. There was some kind of oily liquid rising through the water and forming small ugly patches on the water surface. And the sound growed horrible too. A big constant hum was to be heard and something produced regulare "blobs". Then the shape became visible, distinguishable. It got an iron shell as if it had been armored for battle. There were some strange instruments around and all of sudden a tube breached the ocean surface and a voice spoke to the irritated dwarves.

"Good evening, folks, and welcome to admire my newest creation. It runs on banana cocktails."

And while they smelled the fouly stench of rotten bananas they became aware that the voice originating from this strange tube might belong to the infamous inventor Nasmar Sha'arin, a dwarf who was even considered insane by his liberal southern brethren who whould have appeared crazy to those boring traditional nothern dwarves.

This evening well after the daily rain no fish was brought home but his new "friends" build Nasmar a permanent sanctuary far away from the other southern cities where he could frighten fishes outside the traditional fishing territories. And until some even more insane person devises an engine based on coal somewhere in the future. Larn must hope to not run out of bananas soon. Because if it does there would be war in tropical paradise.
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Emperor NaZdR3G stepped onto the open plains of Elgea, determined to make his mark upon the world. The first city was founded with the name Dysphoria, in a humorous honoring of the mental state of his subjects forever bound in service to their lord. Great efforts were made to build and expand, and the Emperor's efforts garnered the favor of the Lioness. With the approval of the Lord Rahl himself, Emperor NaZdR3G was welcomed into the D'Haran Empire.

It was not long before settlers were forced out of their comfortable homes, to take up residence on the fringe of Kul-Tar. First born was the town of Dementia, its crazed inhabitants constantly fighting off insanity as they work without end in service of their lord. They dedicate themselves to diplomatic efforts of scouting and spying in the service of the head consulate at Dysphoria.

The enclave of Stolidity formed next of the emperor's most stalwart subjects. They too are bound in eternal service but look upon it as a required duty, all subjects of the local regent understand their role in the empire's machinations. They too work towards the good of the head consulate, and tithe their hard earned resources daily to feed Dysphoria's insatiable desire for rapid growth.

As the empire expanded, Emperor NaZdR3G appointed and trained military commanders. Strategies and tactics were learned, and the first raids began. Cities abandoned by their leaders, their citizens without defense or recourse, watched their hard earned assets quickly seized by the Emperor's will. But there was a strong desire now to utilize this growing military to expand the empire so targets were carefully chosen. With the approval of the Lord Rahl, the start of conquest began.

In a hail of catapult fire the first of the fallen, the sad citizens of Amfilochia, surrendered their will to the Emperor and were given the label of Malcontent. Forever resentful of their lot in life, their former master abandoning them and a new power in full control.. The new regent immediately forced the survivors into preparations for exodus into more favorable lands that this city be put to the Emperor's best use. They are quickly learning to accept their lot in life, realizing that service and loyalty result in kindness from their masters.

The next to fall, the town of Beardmore, offered a surprising revelation to Emperor NaZdR3G. The citizens hailed the military commanders as saviors, immediately offering up their town and renaming it Penitency. They see the Emperor as a holy savior, delivering them from the leaderless position they were left in when their master left the continent of Elgea for greener pastures. They will forever serve faithfully in tribute to their new ruler.

The developing cities, lead by the might of Dysphoria, constantly work in service to the D'Haran Empire. But this bloodthirsty nature is carefully controlled, for the Emperor refuses to be the aggressor against an active nation. Rather, the Emperor's subjects embrace the policies of Mercantalism, and seek to actively trade with the residents of the Elgean continent.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Dec 2011 at 19:40

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[northwestern Mal Motsha -- just south of the bend in the great river]

The grey skies let loose their cool droplets, a hundred thousand well-guarded secrets: tiny orbs of precious water suddenly relinquished to the world. Over and over, without cease. We are here! they seemed to shout as they impacted. We are life, and now -- we bring that life to you!

Water struck earth and was absorbed into the soft, worked soil. It fell against green stalks and leaves and clung to them, dully glistening and trembling as the light breeze threatened to break its tenuous hold. And it fell upon the stony face of the lone orc who walked through this storm. It clanged against his massive armor and pummeled the broad, crested shield he wore slung across his back. It dripped off the helmet he carried under his arm, and it pooled in the large depressions his footsteps left in the tender earth.

Tender. It will be difficult to grow accustomed to a land that yields so readily to flesh, the orc thought. So many things about this place were unfamiliar to him. The abundant plant life, for one. The warmth in the air, and the generosity of the heavens when it came to spilling their precious secrets. The mountains of his homeland, rising now far behind him to the east, were made of rock and stone that would crush a thousand mortal bones before deigning to display the slightest crack. The air was crisp and the skies clear; storms were short and violent, not like these lazy, meandering rains that had been plaguing his travels ever since he had cleared the forest and swung his march southwest to hug the shores of the great river. Not for the first time, a scornful expression played across his face.

Why was he trudging through this soaked land, anyway? Was it not wrong to abandon his tribe, his clan? Was it not sinful to turn his back on the peaks, to cast his gaze away from the exalted heights so close to Sky, and instead plod ever downward, spurning the highest intentions of the Earthgod himself? Under what sun were his actions not an affront to all his kin?

His kin. They were, of course, his purpose in all this madness. His father had warned him against such a foolish and blasphemous course, but his stubbornness was hereditary, dooming any such warning to fall on deaf ears. And for the son of the clan Warplanner to flaunt the old wisdom such? The offense was multiplied many times. Journeying far from home, beyond the sacred peaks, and to what end?

"To live in the mudlands, as a worm?" his father had spat at him, shaking and snarling with rage boiling over. Raätalagk had drawn himself up at this, had struck his most imposing figure.

"To show that it can be done," he returned evenly, though his voice too shook with emotion, both anger and suppressed fear. "That the failure of the uprising did not cause these mountains to become our prison. That all the land, all the rock and soil and mud of Oruk's body, all of it is ours!"

Raätalagk snarled softly as he relived the memory, his lips rising to reveal his tusks in the typical orcish way. There was a kind of laughter in that snarl, one that bore not mirth, but merely release. His father and all those he knew were now far behind him.



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Dec 2011 at 13:05
Originally posted by Auraya Auraya wrote:

*dies* So I wrote my entry, hit reply and the page went blank. I went back and all my typing had gone.. *cries* This is why you should always copy/paste before you post a long reply. 

I'll rewrite it later :(


Oh I'm so sorry to hear that. I've had the same thing happen. If it helps I recommend writing your story first in google docs or Word on your computer then pasting it in. It can get some formatting bugs that way but it's better than not having a backup.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Dec 2011 at 12:15
*dies* So I wrote my entry, hit reply and the page went blank. I went back and all my typing had gone.. *cries* This is why you should always copy/paste before you post a long reply. 

I'll rewrite it later :(
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The last thought that Commander Jarra had as he looked upon the vast besieging army at the gates of his city was, 'But the Elementals are bound to the legendary cities! How is this possible?!' He had no thoughts when the huge Black Dragon sent a jet of flame towards him.

Karena Mazdar, last of the nine members of The Council of Illyria, was not used to traveling by the donkey caravan, 'How the mighty have fallen!', she thought, from plush palanquins on mammoths to a measly donkey, well it was that or walking, her host numbering in hundreds, now consisted of a few bodyguards and her faithful servant, young Nim. 'The breakdown of the protective runes should have been our first clue, damn the council members and their foolish deliberations'. She remembered it all too clearly. It began with reports filtering in slowly, attacks on small villages, raids, mere skirmishes on the borders of Lan Larosh. Caravans that once traveled unmolested throughout Illyria, disappearing, while only the donkeys seem to reach their destination. As always these small infractions were forgiven and forgotten, lulled into a false sense of security by a thousand years of peace, held together by the Crowlition and the Cinaess(peace keepers). By the time the co-ordinated attacks turned to a full fledged invasion it was too late. Soon, the legendary cities were hit. Humans, dwarves, elfs and even the blood thirsty orcs weren't spared. The Centrum had fallen. By the time the Cinaess and the Crowlition had gathered their forces, it was too late. And within a matter of a few new moons, a thousand years of peace lay shattered in one swift strike.

'The Factions have risen! They have Dragons and Elementals with them!', said the messenger who had died in her arms, his blood still stained her fine Elven cloak. Long had this been predicted, but years of peace had turned the Factions into mere jests, 'Behave or else the factions will come and take you away', stories to warn unruly children. 'We mocked the Gods and now we pay the price.', she muttered to herself. But more worrisome was the fact that the Factions had all been brought together to form an army with a single minded purpose, destruction of Illyria, and one name stood in the center of it all, Hakan Marsi. A name that had caused the uprising, a name shrouded in mystery, some said he was not human, but a beast, forged by an unholy union of an Orc and an Elf, while others said he had come forth from Audrey(the second), that vile pustular growth in the jungles of Kumala.

The Factions; nomads, traders, scavengers and now the bane of Illyria. Years of skirmishes with the cities across Illyria had forged this mix-race group of people into a battle hardened force, and now led by this brilliant and ruthless general, Hakan Marsi. they had a purpose. No longer were they dormant, mute spectators to the history of Illyria, they had risen to alter it. Hakan's blood-thirsty quench for battle and his need to enforce his will were unstoppable.

The question that dogged Karena Mazdar's mind were numerous. How did the A'madheen, wise seers of the Fara Isle, not foresee this, why were there no warnings? How had their visions been clouded, a new magic had been awakened, elementals and dragons now roamed the land of Illyria, and with it everything had changed. The seers were blind. The protection of the runes failing. She needed answers and the only place to seek them were at the Fortune-Teller's. That's where she was headed on this vile donkey.



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In the years of the War, and all that came after, the only children the mad king killed were his own. 

In the center of the cemetery district of Ashk Dhaak in Arran, there is an obelisk supported by a plinth, 'round which the names of the Seven Bastards are inscribed.  Time and rain have worn the sharp edges of the letters away, and now the monument exists as yet another broken, human curiosity in Orc-held lands.

One wouldn't know it had been Embrey, seat of ancient kings - only the Allembine monks know the truth of that now - but there was a king, Styrald, ninth of his name, who decreed after fifty years of rule that his children should succeed him.  

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According to Embrian custom, all royal progeny were entitled to a share of the kingdom to administer, with the crown passing to the eldest. Only recognized heirs were afforded a share, and it was understood that above all the kingdom must stay whole.

Styrald was handsome – it is recorded that Lannigold blood ran through his veins on his mother’s side. It is certain that he shared that family’s passions - for women and wine, and travel.  Never married, he had issue, and in his besotted condition, enamored by their mothers, he often lost track of how many he had claimed.

It came to pass he had named seven bastards, all of different mothers. There was the swarthy boy borne of the Sultan of Kazim’s daughter, and a miller’s girl, and the half-orc mage, and a ward of the Azure Throne no older than ten. 

The youngest was three, in swaddling - a Lannigold, on his mother’s side.

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Seven armies converged on Embrey, and there the Bastards met their father. Styrald entreated them to settle their differences amicably. But denied a father’s love they decided they would have his empire.

After three days, Styrald saw there could be no amicable division. They would tear his kingdom apart.

And so he got very drunk, and invited them to the tower. Greed brought them to his chamber. There they drank with their father until the poison in their cup was spent. Alone, at last, with their father, to take the measure of a broken king as they lay waiting for their lives to flee them.

Until there was only an old man, weeping, and a babe in swaddling.



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Dec 2011 at 06:11
Straining, his fingers reached the ragged, dusty fabric.  He gingerly inched the fabric closer, then grabbed the small object wrapped in the fabric.   Slowly and carefully he removed the object from the hole in the side of the cave.  Finally it was clear, he held it in his hands and stared in disbelief.  His hands trembled uncontrollably.

Outside the cave the desert sun began to heat the morning air.  He glanced around nervously, instinctively,  making sure he was alone.  He knew he should take this to his lab at the museum, and preserve this treasure for all mankind, but as tears ran down his dust-covered cheeks, he knew that was not going to happen.   

He realized he was breathing too fast, his heart was racing.  Fearing that he would pass out, he deliberately breathed slow and deep.  Dry stale air filled his lungs.  The scream of a hawk circling outside broke the silence.  He squatted on the rocky floor, and with one last look around to make sure he was alone.  He looked at the object in his hands.  

And he read.

The Further Revelations of John the Baptist

1:1  And I dreamed of a land with man, elves, dwarves and brutish beasts called orcs.  And this land was located in the heart of those who lived there and made their home in the land of Illyriad.

1:2  There was much sin in the land.  The females walked with little clothes, especially elves.

1:3  The seven headed beast was born in this land, arising from a vast corrupted heart when the trumpets blared.

1:4 The beast slumbered slowly, making its way to our land, to bring about the end of days as I have previously foreseen.

1:5  And as the beast moved, the hour of our great tribulation grew closer.

1:6  Then a golden light shone down, and the inhabitants of the land descended furiously on the beast.

1:7  And they slew the beast.  No.....wait.....they didn't slay it.  They hugged and snuggled it?

1:8  The army of snugglers crowlition created a vast snugglepile on the beast.   Discretion prevents me from describing the further actions in this snuggle pile, but let me just say that those sodomites would have been proud.

1:9  The beast was tamed.  Please disregard my previous revelations.  Anybody got some more of those mushrooms?



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