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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 Dec 2011 at 21:22

Our fair town of Renaissance, just to the west of central Tor Carrock, was founded by one Jenin, a traveler of great renown in these parts.  Her name is long known one, appropriate to her travels is known in many languages (Jane, Janet, Janice, Jean, Jeannette, Jeannine, Johanna, Joan, Juana, Sheena, Sinead, Vanya, to name a few) and means "new born; mercy of, or little gift from God" – indeed to we townsmen of Renaissance, she certainly is all that.

 

Our benefactor has journeyed far and wide, seeing even other worlds, before settling in the Kingdom of the Illyriad.  Once finding the place a much welcomed relief after the toils of other places where far too many games were played, she stopped for some respite.  With the tiny settlement she started, the villagers and other subjects of the realm made her feel so welcomed that she felt reborn, hence the name of our fair town; Renaissance.

 

Of all the worlds seen by our Jenin, she says none can compare to the rule of King Sigurd, with his very well constructed rule of a very diverse domain.  His brilliance is seen every day in his territory, where his general managers see to his subjects needs, make sure all have an equal opportunity and that all is running smooth.  It is notable that many volunteers are inspired to welcome new immigrants to the country which will surely fuel yet more growth and even greater creativity. 

 

All this said, some new settlements do fail though, due to the dismissal of their founders, but the resources are collected and are collected with celebration to support the lives of our own citizens.  So, even though there are those who do not appreciate King Sigurd, there is still benefit in their giving this region a try.  Our founder can not see what is not to love about a territory of this size, its diverse races, varied climates, beautiful flora, amazing fauna and the felicity of her residents. 

 

Our town’s architect looks forward to making yet more new settlements in different places and loves the most of the new features Illyrian civilization.  Although our Jenin longs also for a nationwide judicial system, things such as the new developments in magic and the promise of more comprehensive trade have her waking excitedly to greet every day in the Great Kingdom of Illyria.  Long live King Sigurd!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 Dec 2011 at 18:15
The Saddlemaker's Son
 
   "Bertraaaaam!" Her voice echoed in the street from the window above, somehow more shrill than the squeaking axle of barrow he pushed, clattering over the cobblestone.
 

    “Yes, mother,” he half sighed, lowering the cart with a heavy thunk to turn and look up to her.

    “Are you taking that order to the consulate, like your father asked?”

    The young Bertram turned his gaze from the matriarch gazing down on him to his burdened cart, and back, managing not to roll his eyes. “I was, mother!”

    “That’s a good lad! And don’t dawdle with that girl from the watch. They say she’s a thief!”

    “No, she catches…”

    But his protest was cut short by the window clanking shut.

    The whining and groaning of his cart mostly drowned out his indignant mumbling as he made his way down the street, until the voice from the alley halted his progress, again.

    “’That girl from the watch’?” came the richly bemused, feminine tone.

    He let the cart once again drop down to rest, coming to meet her arch-browed and smirking gaze with a sheepish shrug. “Gretchen. Sorry. She’s my mother. I’ll explain it to her,” he groaned plaintively, before adding, “Again.”

    But the dark haired slip of a girl merely purred a smugly dubious, “Mmmhmm,” before letting her playfully accusatory tone mercifully slip. “Don’t fret. Nobody trusts a girl in my line of work. Well, except the lord who hired me.” She tipped her head over his shoulder to the cart behind him. “More saddles to the consulate?”

    “Yup. You people sure use a lot of them.”

    “Yeah. It’s sort of a tradition. We issue a new horse and saddle to each recruit.”

    “I didn’t think you had that many working for you?”

    “We don’t. We have a high turnover rate.”

    “Ahhh. So, where are you off to?”

    “Just to fetch some beer for the lads at the consulate.”

    “Oh, to the tavern?”

    “No, the storehouse. We avoid the tavern whenever we can. When they know what you do, you can’t go in there without getting sob stories. Between snooty elves and orc-hunters and incompetent nobles, it just gets tiresome.”

    “I can imagine.”

    But their conversation was cut short by a girlish giggle and shriek as Bertram barely stepped out of her way, being chased breathlessly by the determined looking, elderly but surprisingly spry farmer.

    “I don’t trust that man,” Gretchen commented in a hush after they’d passed. “That’s the third bride we found for him since spring.”



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 Dec 2011 at 01:29
Not all Orcs are evil. Most are just misguided or work for an evil master.

You could say, i was once an evil Orc.
I lived under the control of the War-King of Blood Reavers, Tlachcog. during the 23 years i served him, i never questioned his orders. that is, until the 24th year. he told us he made a deal with members of circle of five, to help with some sort of 'Portal'. i had know idea what the details were, just that i must obey. my first task, was moving some 'artifacts'. as usual, i did my best to follow my orders. but, when i was moving the last crate, i tripped and fell, causing the content of the box to fall out. Panicking, i attempted to put the relics back into the box. as my hand approached the first one, i noticed it to be a horned statue with bizarre runes carved into the side. i was about to grap it, but felt something...strange go through me. i was compelled to move away. so i did.
After the finished whipping me for disobedience, my second task began. "Find goat! Drain blood!" they barked at me. i should have enjoyed the task, but it seemed so...Wrong. killing without a purpose is wrong, even for a Orc. still, better than the whips, i told myself.
My 3rd task was not for my masters, for Tlachcog or The Reavers. we had finished construction of 'the gate'. i saw the 5 arch magi step near the gate (Faer Smyss of the Fey seemed reluctant to do so). after a half and hour of chanting words i could not understand, a bright blue light which grew larger every second appeared in the center of the gate.

Then, all hell broke loose.

Red creatures which resembled goblin with black knifes began swarming out of the portal. i shouted a call to arms for my fellow brother to fight them. we fought, killing many, but no matter how much we killed, they kept coming. i searched around for my leader, or even the magi. they had already fled, leaving us to die.
i fought my way to the gate, hoping to seal it. i began cutting the ropes which held it all together. before the late rope was cut, i gazed into the blue light. my gaze was met, by something i would rather not describe. its Red eyes haunt my nightmares even today. finally i cut the last rope. the whole gate tumbled down, leaving nothing but ruin.
Feeling triumphant, i turned to howl to my brothers.

Nothing was left. every where i looked i saw fallen friends. i was the only one spared.
I live on today, serving a new master. i have moved on. deep in the back of my mind thought i still have the memory of  Him, The Evil One. as such, i have dedicated my life to making sure such a tragedy will never happen again

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Dark Days Coming...

Rohk was a young elf attending the Academy of Magic, embracing his mystical heritage when he encountered a chameleon. The chameleon, that tended to take on earth tones and ruddy hues when changing colour, became a familiar for him. At night, after the arcane studies of the day were done, the Chameleon would whisper to Rohk, telling him arcane secrets beyond his wildest dreams. In time, the Chameleon was able to communicate with Rohk telepathically.

Several years passed and eventually Rohk mastered the power of rune magic. With those skills in hand, he attempted some of the rituals that the Chameleon had taught him. No sooner had he tried the first incantation, and then he was transported to a land of fire, pain and torment. There, he saw a large demon with red skin, black eyes, horns, and wings. Black armour protected his form and many precious rings adorned his claws. He introduces himself as a prince of the Infernal Realms. The demon spoke to Rohk in a language he had not heard before but somehow, Rohk understood. The voice of the demon was familiar; it was that of the Chameleon. In exchange for giving Rohk the arcane secrets and knowledge of forbidden magicks, the demon prince would accompany Rohk throughout the land in the form of the Chameleon to scout the world for potential threats that might befall the demon prince’s realm. Rohk accepted the bargain but was wary. He did not trust that the demon prince would not try to manipulate him or try to enter Illyria and conquer it for his own. To that end, Rohk sought to learn the forbidden magicks while secretly establishing an empire and alliances to oppose the demon prince should he ever try to enter Illyria as well as preparing the other inhabitants for the possible dark future ahead...

Over time, using the forbidden magicks taught to him by the demon has turned his skin from a pale green to a pale red. As well, the new skin has toughened up to become like soft scales. If observed without his hooded cloak, you can see two tiny nubs starting to develop from his skull. He once thought of avoiding public view, isolating himself and fixing his appearance but now none of his spells can hide the dark influence of the forbidden magicks. He now maintains a cloaked persona, one of mystery and of shadow while he continues his vital and secret mission.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 Dec 2011 at 15:05

Drinking With Dwarves

We’d made it to the second pitcher of the fine Aqua da Pyro Moonshine. My face was beginning to go numb, but the dwarf was still pounding the drink, so I wasn’t to let up. Pounding drink after drink, we got to where we could only barely understand each other. 

We ended up mixing my ‘shine with his Dwarven Whiskey. The truly magical mixture sizzled and popped. The dark elf dropped back behind the bar as me and the dwarf watched the mixture with glee. After it settled we each took a hearty swallow. It was like drinking fire itself. The dwarf burped and bubbles that popped like exotic fireworks erupted from his mouth and nose. The sights made us each giggle like children.

We polished off the mixture, and realized each other were still standing… in a sense. The nearest alcoholic beverage was across the tavern, a barrel of ale. No one else being around, we took it upon ourselves to get to the barrel.  

The dwarf lay down on his back and started sliding himself across the floor, knocking over chairs and tables alike. I was following, keeping close, crawling on my hands and knees and laughing the whole way. At one point, the dwarf’s axe got hung in a notch in the floor. While yelling about how they got him, I went to work undoing the beltwork holding the axe in place. (If you’ve never tried to de-arm a really drunk dwarf, don’t try it.) After what seemed like a millennia, we got him free and continued our journey towards the ale.

We finally reached the barrel, but realized it was untapped and we had no mugs. Leave it to a dwarf to come up with a solution. He punched the barrel, cracking it pretty good and it started releasing a steady stream of the golden liquid.

We took turns drinking from the stream while discussing what to tell everyone the next day. We decided on the story of a monster breaking in, trying to steal the ale. We battled this monster near to its death before it fled. And it drank all the ale at some point. We both passed out underneath the emptying barrel of ale.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 Dec 2011 at 12:56
Screams of terror cut through the icy night, fires lit up sky, ashes circling through the air it gave the village an almost demonic look.
the roads filled with the blood of the inhabitants, a pile of corpses on the townsquare women,men and children alike with facial expressions wich seemed to have frozen in extreme anquish and terror.
A loud voic boomed in a horrible orcish accent "hurry up you gitz! king sigurds soldiers will be here any minute and i'll be damned if i can't receive them properly!" 
The orcs of Uzgrub waagrot hurried up with gathering the corpses throwing the one by one on the slowly growing pile.
Uzgrub watched this with great joy this feeling only intensified by the knowledge of another fight in the very near future his orcs equally excited by this collected bodies faster  then they ever did before.

A scout send out to find the army of king sigurd came running into town yelling "they are gonna be here soon!"
Uzgrub yelled out to hide and wait for them, the orcs all excited with the prospect of spilling human blood showing king sigurd not all the orcish tribes are tamed!
the sun had slowly moved along the sky it slowly reached its highest point, when finally king sigurds men walked into town there swords drawn, there poses betrayed they were feeling uncomfortable.
A smirk came over uzgrub's face knowing his handywork gave those soft humans chills down there spine.
when the soldiers of king sigurd reached the townsquare orcs jumped out of hidingplaces and fell upon the soldiers, they never stood a chance. Uzgrub watched happely while his orcs were tearing the soldiers apart, he laughed when he saw one of his orcs ripping out the heart of a soldier and ate it greedely.
The orcs feasted on the human flesh all day, drinking the blood mixed with wine or beer,as the feast progressed the orcs got wilder ,as a bit of fun one of the lower orcs who had been injured while fighting the soldiers was tied to 4 horses a limb for each horse.
The orc tried to get loose at that moment the horses were persuaded to move slowly ripping him apart, the orc screamed in anquish all the others laughed loudly enjoying his suffering.

Loud roars filled the air, the scent of death and decay hanging in the air, ah Uzgrub never has been happier.

The clan of Oggrod needs no weaklings, the waaaghboss neads no weaklings.

Orcs do not get injured, Orcs kill or are killed.


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Everyone thinks that I am an elf. But I’m not. At least I am pretty sure I am not. I was raised among humans, no one knowing who my father was, or my mother really. I think of the woman who raised me as my mother, but she tells me that she found me on a cold winter’s night, in the arms of a dead woman. She always told me that my mother at least appeared to be human. When she saw my ears, she knew something was amiss. But she took me anyway, and raised me to be strong of body and of mind and to take care of myself.

 

She died of consumption not long after I technically became a woman. I was 22. Old for a human but not for an elf. I am shorter than most elves and yet tall for a human woman. I can only think that by some strange magic my father was elfkin.

 

I knew after her death that I could not stay in the human lands, and so I left, on my own. I had to dodge many a raider but managed to raise enough gold to build my own place. I called it Greenpeace, after the woman who raised me. Her name was Molly Green. It did not take long for elfkin to come calling and to decide I was safe enough. Soon refuges, both human and elfin came to live near my home and a growing community began to thrive. We had so many people that we eventually had to settle some nearby areas to have more room for crops and to graze animals which we can trade for harder to get items.

 

On cold nights, I still miss the woman who had the courage to raise me. I hope that I do honor to her memory.


Cerridwyn ~-~ Cerdwyn

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 Dec 2011 at 01:02
I made some changes to. Mainly to fit closer to the faction characters on who they are based
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Dec 2011 at 21:46
Thank you, Luna. I've edited to add a bit, though not too much. Cheers!
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Should be editable now.
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