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    Posted: 13 Dec 2011 at 02:47
This contest is now over and the winners have been announced. Thanks for participating!

Greetings Illyriad community,

Who among you has a wonderful tale to tell? Well, here's your chance to wow us all and win some prizes while you are at it.

How to enter:
Respond to this thread with a 300-400 word fictional story about your character or city in Illyriad. Be creative and have fun with it. It can be about your backstory, the establishment or growth of your city, a tale about your commanders, about a holiday your citizens celebrate, about an epic battle... It can be serious, sad, funny, whatever tone you'd like. The choice is yours! 

How to win:
Post your new original story before the end of the day on Monday, December 19 Server time (6PM CST). The stories will then be read and winners will be chosen by the GM staff. Winners will be chosen based on originality, creativity and storytelling. (I'm not an English professor and this isn't a class so don't worry if you don't have the best typing or spelling abilities. That will not count against your ability to win.)

Prizes:


One (1) Grand Prize winner will receive: one t-shirt and one poster of their choice from the Illyriad store as well as 1200 Prestige in game.

Two (2) Runner Up winners will receive 500 Prestige in game. 


Good luck and happy writing. I look forward to reading all of your stories.

GM Luna


Details: Winners will be notified via private message on the forums or via email address to which the winning forum account is registered. You must have a valid Illyriad forum account to enter to win. Only one entry per person per forum account. Prizes paid for by Illyriad Games, Ltd. All entries must respect Illyriad forum rules. Entries can be removed or disqualified if they do not follow the forum rules or if they are not the original content of the poster. Grand prize winner must provide a valid mailing address in order to receive t-shirt and poster prizes. An active Illyriad game account is required to receive Prestige prizes. No substitution for the prizes listed will be given. Winners must respond within 7 days of notification in order to receive prizes. Entries close end of day 12/19/2011.



Edited by GM Luna - 20 Dec 2011 at 14:21
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Dec 2011 at 04:06
1200 prestige? 500 prestige? hot damn! (pardon my language)

/me goes to get a plume.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Dec 2011 at 04:43
GM Luna, is there a particular way we should label our threads so you can see them. And Should they go in the Traveller's Tales? Or do we post them in one go here?
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Post your story in a reply to this thread please. Thanks!

Edit: Please also post the entire story within one reply as well.

Edited by GM Luna - 13 Dec 2011 at 04:47
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 Dec 2011 at 06:11
Straining, his fingers reached the ragged, dusty fabric.  He gingerly inched the fabric closer, then grabbed the small object wrapped in the fabric.   Slowly and carefully he removed the object from the hole in the side of the cave.  Finally it was clear, he held it in his hands and stared in disbelief.  His hands trembled uncontrollably.

Outside the cave the desert sun began to heat the morning air.  He glanced around nervously, instinctively,  making sure he was alone.  He knew he should take this to his lab at the museum, and preserve this treasure for all mankind, but as tears ran down his dust-covered cheeks, he knew that was not going to happen.   

He realized he was breathing too fast, his heart was racing.  Fearing that he would pass out, he deliberately breathed slow and deep.  Dry stale air filled his lungs.  The scream of a hawk circling outside broke the silence.  He squatted on the rocky floor, and with one last look around to make sure he was alone.  He looked at the object in his hands.  

And he read.

The Further Revelations of John the Baptist

1:1  And I dreamed of a land with man, elves, dwarves and brutish beasts called orcs.  And this land was located in the heart of those who lived there and made their home in the land of Illyriad.

1:2  There was much sin in the land.  The females walked with little clothes, especially elves.

1:3  The seven headed beast was born in this land, arising from a vast corrupted heart when the trumpets blared.

1:4 The beast slumbered slowly, making its way to our land, to bring about the end of days as I have previously foreseen.

1:5  And as the beast moved, the hour of our great tribulation grew closer.

1:6  Then a golden light shone down, and the inhabitants of the land descended furiously on the beast.

1:7  And they slew the beast.  No.....wait.....they didn't slay it.  They hugged and snuggled it?

1:8  The army of snugglers crowlition created a vast snugglepile on the beast.   Discretion prevents me from describing the further actions in this snuggle pile, but let me just say that those sodomites would have been proud.

1:9  The beast was tamed.  Please disregard my previous revelations.  Anybody got some more of those mushrooms?



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In the years of the War, and all that came after, the only children the mad king killed were his own. 

In the center of the cemetery district of Ashk Dhaak in Arran, there is an obelisk supported by a plinth, 'round which the names of the Seven Bastards are inscribed.  Time and rain have worn the sharp edges of the letters away, and now the monument exists as yet another broken, human curiosity in Orc-held lands.

One wouldn't know it had been Embrey, seat of ancient kings - only the Allembine monks know the truth of that now - but there was a king, Styrald, ninth of his name, who decreed after fifty years of rule that his children should succeed him.  

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According to Embrian custom, all royal progeny were entitled to a share of the kingdom to administer, with the crown passing to the eldest. Only recognized heirs were afforded a share, and it was understood that above all the kingdom must stay whole.

Styrald was handsome – it is recorded that Lannigold blood ran through his veins on his mother’s side. It is certain that he shared that family’s passions - for women and wine, and travel.  Never married, he had issue, and in his besotted condition, enamored by their mothers, he often lost track of how many he had claimed.

It came to pass he had named seven bastards, all of different mothers. There was the swarthy boy borne of the Sultan of Kazim’s daughter, and a miller’s girl, and the half-orc mage, and a ward of the Azure Throne no older than ten. 

The youngest was three, in swaddling - a Lannigold, on his mother’s side.

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Seven armies converged on Embrey, and there the Bastards met their father. Styrald entreated them to settle their differences amicably. But denied a father’s love they decided they would have his empire.

After three days, Styrald saw there could be no amicable division. They would tear his kingdom apart.

And so he got very drunk, and invited them to the tower. Greed brought them to his chamber. There they drank with their father until the poison in their cup was spent. Alone, at last, with their father, to take the measure of a broken king as they lay waiting for their lives to flee them.

Until there was only an old man, weeping, and a babe in swaddling.



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The last thought that Commander Jarra had as he looked upon the vast besieging army at the gates of his city was, 'But the Elementals are bound to the legendary cities! How is this possible?!' He had no thoughts when the huge Black Dragon sent a jet of flame towards him.

Karena Mazdar, last of the nine members of The Council of Illyria, was not used to traveling by the donkey caravan, 'How the mighty have fallen!', she thought, from plush palanquins on mammoths to a measly donkey, well it was that or walking, her host numbering in hundreds, now consisted of a few bodyguards and her faithful servant, young Nim. 'The breakdown of the protective runes should have been our first clue, damn the council members and their foolish deliberations'. She remembered it all too clearly. It began with reports filtering in slowly, attacks on small villages, raids, mere skirmishes on the borders of Lan Larosh. Caravans that once traveled unmolested throughout Illyria, disappearing, while only the donkeys seem to reach their destination. As always these small infractions were forgiven and forgotten, lulled into a false sense of security by a thousand years of peace, held together by the Crowlition and the Cinaess(peace keepers). By the time the co-ordinated attacks turned to a full fledged invasion it was too late. Soon, the legendary cities were hit. Humans, dwarves, elfs and even the blood thirsty orcs weren't spared. The Centrum had fallen. By the time the Cinaess and the Crowlition had gathered their forces, it was too late. And within a matter of a few new moons, a thousand years of peace lay shattered in one swift strike.

'The Factions have risen! They have Dragons and Elementals with them!', said the messenger who had died in her arms, his blood still stained her fine Elven cloak. Long had this been predicted, but years of peace had turned the Factions into mere jests, 'Behave or else the factions will come and take you away', stories to warn unruly children. 'We mocked the Gods and now we pay the price.', she muttered to herself. But more worrisome was the fact that the Factions had all been brought together to form an army with a single minded purpose, destruction of Illyria, and one name stood in the center of it all, Hakan Marsi. A name that had caused the uprising, a name shrouded in mystery, some said he was not human, but a beast, forged by an unholy union of an Orc and an Elf, while others said he had come forth from Audrey(the second), that vile pustular growth in the jungles of Kumala.

The Factions; nomads, traders, scavengers and now the bane of Illyria. Years of skirmishes with the cities across Illyria had forged this mix-race group of people into a battle hardened force, and now led by this brilliant and ruthless general, Hakan Marsi. they had a purpose. No longer were they dormant, mute spectators to the history of Illyria, they had risen to alter it. Hakan's blood-thirsty quench for battle and his need to enforce his will were unstoppable.

The question that dogged Karena Mazdar's mind were numerous. How did the A'madheen, wise seers of the Fara Isle, not foresee this, why were there no warnings? How had their visions been clouded, a new magic had been awakened, elementals and dragons now roamed the land of Illyria, and with it everything had changed. The seers were blind. The protection of the runes failing. She needed answers and the only place to seek them were at the Fortune-Teller's. That's where she was headed on this vile donkey.



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*dies* So I wrote my entry, hit reply and the page went blank. I went back and all my typing had gone.. *cries* This is why you should always copy/paste before you post a long reply. 

I'll rewrite it later :(
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Originally posted by Auraya Auraya wrote:

*dies* So I wrote my entry, hit reply and the page went blank. I went back and all my typing had gone.. *cries* This is why you should always copy/paste before you post a long reply. 

I'll rewrite it later :(


Oh I'm so sorry to hear that. I've had the same thing happen. If it helps I recommend writing your story first in google docs or Word on your computer then pasting it in. It can get some formatting bugs that way but it's better than not having a backup.

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Descent

[northwestern Mal Motsha -- just south of the bend in the great river]

The grey skies let loose their cool droplets, a hundred thousand well-guarded secrets: tiny orbs of precious water suddenly relinquished to the world. Over and over, without cease. We are here! they seemed to shout as they impacted. We are life, and now -- we bring that life to you!

Water struck earth and was absorbed into the soft, worked soil. It fell against green stalks and leaves and clung to them, dully glistening and trembling as the light breeze threatened to break its tenuous hold. And it fell upon the stony face of the lone orc who walked through this storm. It clanged against his massive armor and pummeled the broad, crested shield he wore slung across his back. It dripped off the helmet he carried under his arm, and it pooled in the large depressions his footsteps left in the tender earth.

Tender. It will be difficult to grow accustomed to a land that yields so readily to flesh, the orc thought. So many things about this place were unfamiliar to him. The abundant plant life, for one. The warmth in the air, and the generosity of the heavens when it came to spilling their precious secrets. The mountains of his homeland, rising now far behind him to the east, were made of rock and stone that would crush a thousand mortal bones before deigning to display the slightest crack. The air was crisp and the skies clear; storms were short and violent, not like these lazy, meandering rains that had been plaguing his travels ever since he had cleared the forest and swung his march southwest to hug the shores of the great river. Not for the first time, a scornful expression played across his face.

Why was he trudging through this soaked land, anyway? Was it not wrong to abandon his tribe, his clan? Was it not sinful to turn his back on the peaks, to cast his gaze away from the exalted heights so close to Sky, and instead plod ever downward, spurning the highest intentions of the Earthgod himself? Under what sun were his actions not an affront to all his kin?

His kin. They were, of course, his purpose in all this madness. His father had warned him against such a foolish and blasphemous course, but his stubbornness was hereditary, dooming any such warning to fall on deaf ears. And for the son of the clan Warplanner to flaunt the old wisdom such? The offense was multiplied many times. Journeying far from home, beyond the sacred peaks, and to what end?

"To live in the mudlands, as a worm?" his father had spat at him, shaking and snarling with rage boiling over. Raätalagk had drawn himself up at this, had struck his most imposing figure.

"To show that it can be done," he returned evenly, though his voice too shook with emotion, both anger and suppressed fear. "That the failure of the uprising did not cause these mountains to become our prison. That all the land, all the rock and soil and mud of Oruk's body, all of it is ours!"

Raätalagk snarled softly as he relived the memory, his lips rising to reveal his tusks in the typical orcish way. There was a kind of laughter in that snarl, one that bore not mirth, but merely release. His father and all those he knew were now far behind him.



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