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Gimli Son of Groin 
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Joined: 03 Oct 2011
Location: Cambridge
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Points: 79
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 Posted: 05 Oct 2011 at 18:06 |
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Not true...
I made every bit up from imagination.
Edited by Gimli Son of Groin - 05 Oct 2011 at 18:08
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Gaia Nutella Tulips
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Joined: 22 Jun 2011
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Points: 62
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Posted: 05 Oct 2011 at 17:54 |
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Do any of you know that he is stealing bits of various stories I have written!? Maybe I should post the original starting chapters here.. Anyone interested for a better none dorf version?
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Belthazor
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Joined: 10 Oct 2010
Location: Asgard
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Points: 97
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Posted: 05 Oct 2011 at 17:42 |
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We work in the Dark to serve the Light
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Gimli Son of Groin
Greenhorn
Joined: 03 Oct 2011
Location: Cambridge
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Points: 79
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Posted: 05 Oct 2011 at 17:37 |
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Out of the corner of his eye, he saw something dark flit from shadow to shadow. He continued watching it until it had positioned itself in a direct line with himself. He watched as it took a bow out of it's pouch and saw it aiming. The King yelled, “ Everyone duck! Watch out!†He leapt through the window and tackled the person. As his arms closed around the person, he felt a searing pain in his chest. King Hrothgar drew his sword and as quick as a lightning bolt, stabbed the person in his chest. He felt a sticky liquid dribble down his chest. He looked down at his chest and gasped as he saw the full extent of what had happened to his body.
Belthazor had charged past everyone else, Ryelle following his lead and felt the human king's pulse. Nothing. He started to sob, his face contorted with sadness and tears dribbling down his cheeks, he wailed. His cousin, King Hrothgar had been slain by a mage. This type of mage, he concluded was one of the most powerful in all of Illyriad. Belthazor murmured in a quiet voice,"The King has been slain. We shall wreak havoc among the mages for what they have done to us."
Edited by Gimli Son of Groin - 05 Oct 2011 at 18:07
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Rill
Postmaster General
Player Council - Geographer
Joined: 17 Jun 2011
Location: California
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Points: 6903
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Posted: 04 Oct 2011 at 07:40 |
/me waits 
Edited by Rill - 04 Oct 2011 at 07:40
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Gimli Son of Groin
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Joined: 03 Oct 2011
Location: Cambridge
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Points: 79
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Posted: 04 Oct 2011 at 07:21 |
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Next bit is coming soon
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Gimli Son of Groin
Greenhorn
Joined: 03 Oct 2011
Location: Cambridge
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Points: 79
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Posted: 03 Oct 2011 at 17:22 |
 She's a child! She doesn't play, she is.
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Hugie
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Joined: 26 Aug 2011
Location: UK
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Points: 84
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Posted: 03 Oct 2011 at 17:19 |
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I love the way you weave in the main characters of today's Illyria! What next? Who is the 7-year-old? Why didn't the Lady Ryelle give the child 3k each of basic resources, instead of a small coin?
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Gimli Son of Groin
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Joined: 03 Oct 2011
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Posted: 03 Oct 2011 at 17:16 |
Hehehe Figure it out 
Edited by Gimli Son of Groin - 03 Oct 2011 at 17:17
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Rill
Postmaster General
Player Council - Geographer
Joined: 17 Jun 2011
Location: California
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Posted: 03 Oct 2011 at 17:15 |
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This is awesome! I wanna know what happens. Mages or trolls, which is worse?
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