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    Posted: 20 May 2012 at 08:44
Sure. Why not?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 May 2012 at 08:19
You? Update soon, guys, I forgot about it-again... :P
“A single dream is more powerful than a thousand realities.”
― J.R.R. Tolkien

“I warn you, if you bore me, I shall take my revenge.”
― J.R.R. Tolkien
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 Mar 2012 at 11:57
Start killing characters that people like. Something unpredictable.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 Mar 2012 at 08:52
I'll try and write more, but am stuck! Quite a few writers are suck in writing their stories!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 Mar 2012 at 19:52
Smash human king, like rock.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 Mar 2012 at 16:02
nice plot twists. Smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 Mar 2012 at 14:44
I love how GSoG likes killing things and then making it sound playful. If I were a dumb dragon having "bumble bees" attack me I would go and cry! And I do like the way Nidhogg's head bounces xD
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 Jan 2012 at 16:16
The Sergeant was a survivor. He knew that he would die if he didn't do anything, so he took the risk of his life. He jumped over the edge of the wall, but not backwards. No, to do that would mean certain death. He jumped over the palisades and hoped for the best.
        He was a lucky man, and obviously the Gods favoured him. He landed heavily, knocking the breath out of him. The very ground beneath him began to shake and he looked down. That was a big mistake. He vomited and righted himself. He drew his sword. He asked the Gods, praying that his random weak spot, behind his right ear would reveal itself. His prayer was answered. He saw a glowing green spot behind the Dragon's ear and plunged his sword deep down and into the Dragon's brain.       

By now, they were above one of the towns; mistake, HIS town. He could see the Town Hall from his vantage point and hoped that he would survive the crash. He on then suddenly saw a wise face in one of the windows of the Town Hall. He wore a crown and-- It was the King! What the hell was he doing there? He sighed and got back to his work.
           He applied as much pressure as he could on the Dragon's head, forcing it downwards. He felt the wind tearing at his face as the Dragon's body lurched down. He looked down fearfully and knew this was to be his fate. To die after he killed the greatest Dragon ever. Seconds before he crashed into the ground, the middle aged man jumped. As the body slammed into the ground, and skidded to a stand-still, even knocking the great doors of the Town Hall open wide, the Sergeant landed on the Nidhogg's body. His sword followed; it sliced off Nidhogg's head and bounced back into the soldier's hand neatly.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 Jan 2012 at 16:24
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 Jan 2012 at 20:53
Is it bad that I'm rooting for the dragon?

Good story, Gim.
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